Teacher Feedback

Class feedback on Pitch

Myself, Kaan and Kallum presented our pitch and idea to our classmates and received very useful feedback which we will try to use and take on board in order to make our artist and brand better.

Postive Feedback;

• The song choice
• The artist's background
• The label
• Locations made clear

Constructive Feedback;

• Narrative of video was not made clear
• Our artist's name was unknown
• Too young

Feedback

Today the class teacher gave us feedback on our post. I will go through this sheet and improve on my blogs as well as the lay out of it